Fated Fragment

Seems like a decent story. Only read 10 chapsNormal guy runs into a mage and becomes his apprentice. Due to his poor elemental affinity he takes a mysterious potion that makes him a pure water mage. Have to see how it goes.

keep it up nice work........................................................................................................................................................................................................

Author is complete noob. But he has a vivid imagination and his narration abilities are great. .     .   . .  .................................

"Fuck. I do not have time for these things, I will take it to the ship "- Indra shouted desperate for not finding the right answer.

Delbury had half expected to see someone of the vamp type, a girl with pretty though hard features, with eyes that were mere traps for the unsuspecting---- eyes that could lie and smile. A lie with wicked facility. The clever daughter of a clever father---- that's what he expected to find.

"Are you perhaps upset?"

It still sadden and troubles him strongly, so he blurted out a wish he had.

Upon noticing Jack's loud entrance into the river they immediately became hostile and directed their attention at the Red Goblin.