Fate to You: Obsession

Shameless Editor’s review!(No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story)I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119)The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!)The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging.Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven)With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom.So why not give it a read?

Imagine a story where mc has 500 IQ is orphan and no power and gets bullied. Then he gets a system and takes revenge on those bullies goes to find his girlfriend that got adopted to learn she has a fiancé that is from a very powerful family. He then gets stronger and rescues her while fighting in the dungeons to find out that a different race made these dungeons to conquer the earth. He then fights against this powerfull race and visits different worlds and turns into the strongest person in the universeTHAT is exactly not what’s happening here because mc is basically the strongest person in all universes from the start so we don’t waste our time seeing him train and fight hundreds of filler chapters. Expect a story where mc can and will do what ever he wants without all the cliche bull I wrote at the beginning that would take 1000+ chapters.

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The system idea is novel but mc becomes op too fast. There was no story development, no essence. Not for me. Ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg.

Hate it. MC is illogical and I can spot mistakes in some places. Some people could like this but it really isn’t for me. Everything is just… it hurts my brain in some places so I can’t continue reading.

one of the best novels in apocalypse genre .............,..............                     .................................................

This story is good so far getting more interesting as it goes could use more background work but I like it a lot can't wait to see how involved the story gets

aaaaa oml Istg the plot in this story inspired me- Like the way you write is really great! The characters, the plot, the situations, backstories, everything! Your grammar and way of writing is really my style! ;w; I'd recommend this book not gonna lie T^T❤️ I've only read 12 parts and it's already stunning! Great job! keep up the good work noc!! I've developed a crush for Ethan now- 😭😭😭 - teaii