Farming and Foraging: The Busy Life of a Village Girl

Good English

Man, this girl has quite the temper huh. But honestly…...I don't care about introductions, I just want to drink, dammit. I don't have the opportunities to do so in reality after all.

'That worked a little better than I thought, and that was just barely releasing it's power. If I unleashed the full power of Fear, I could kill a whole city with heart attacks.' Zachary put his sword away and walked back into the house.

*flashback*

I'm proud to read this.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable.The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl.Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't.Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps.All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid.3/5Keep it up lad!

I saw that there isn’t a tag for romance so does that mean there’s no romance? I know he’s a kid right now so there obviously won’t be any but will there be any in the future when he’s older?

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.