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Heyo crazy cronie here,review on 29/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 27)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: Gives you 'Accept disciples and become stronger' and 'History's no one founder' vibes. AND LET ME SAY IT ONCE AGAIN, THE REVIEW IS BASED ON JUST 30 CHAPS!long review: pros: 1) Even though the story isn't original, this is still a fresh read since this ain't the type of plotline WN authors generally pick coz it's a lot more difficult.2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro.)3) MC is smart unlike other novels where the main trait of the mc is idiocy. No plot armour saving MC's ass, mc knows to hide, to run.... Atleast for now that's the casd4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. 5) Side chara gets the deserved attention. Even though still less than 30 chaps I know the author is giving them the screen time required.6) Author interacts with the readers... Listens to their ideas, opinions and advices and uses them, a big plus compared to those who just take many criticisms and advices comments as malice....7) Maybe because it is new but the updates are stable.. and it is even 10 chaps a week!! Something which I love!!cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Too much info? Author sometimes give more than info dump required. (I cut my entertainment points coz of that.)2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension as said above. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro since I was searching something like this.)3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Nothing can be said clearly about world. We don't exactly know where the plot is heading... But then again WE ARE JUST 30 CHAPS IN!!4) MC doesn't have really have any ambition. Like*SPOILER* he just gets a disciple coz the system said so... The system didn't threaten him and neither it was shown that mc wanted to become really strong!!That maybe coz it's just 30 chaps and maybe revealed in the future.5) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Easy to understand writing with little bit of typo errors and some grammatical mistakes which are negligible. IMO:- A little less info dump would be better... - A little ambitious MC would be a big plus for this novel, like creating your own clan/group/organisation... Just a lil bit of hint would be fine ... Even something like wanting to live a carefree life that's why making your disciples strong is also okay As long as my opinions doesn't spoil the plotRATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-5)update: 9/10 (pro-7)plot: 8/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&3) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&5, con-4)pacing: 8.5/10 (pro-4)dialogues: 8/10 (pro-5)entertainment: 8.5/10OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion:This novel has excellent potential! I am just worried like many other WN authors, he doesn't stop updating... I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Thanks for the chapters!If possible pin this review @PurpleSpring bruh!Next review after chap 100WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC till now seems to be neutral. Neither hero, nor villain... Should have been anti hero but even that isn't mentioned...-
Yay! I love BL, and Iβm so glad to find a book with good quality BL here. The two main characters have adorable interactions. I definitely recommend this book! π
I have started binge reading this so I can't say much about the updates just 3/week seems a bit little, but in exchange for the lower frequency we get a really good quality. The MC is not stupidly OP after reincarnating - it shows he still has weaknesses. Some might say certain situations are unrealistic, but if you take in account what happens right before the MC reincarnates I think it is good writing that the MC sometimes does things cause he loses control of his emotions.
I didn't care, I was happy. My doubt's were just doubt's, I didn't know what to do next. I saw Jenny about 10 minutes later and she saw me. I wanted to walk up to her, talk to her, take her away from her friends, and just hug her. I don't know, but I felt something strange, a bad feeling that something is going to happen...Soon...
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