This Was One of the Best novels i,ve read so far i want chapters and don,t want to read the ending with a story like this i’m sure nearly everyone who read this novel will become mesmerized. 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻Ps: i want more stories like this one right here
This is very good and I like that the story starts right away. I also like that the character seems well developed and we can see how the character thinks from the onset. I think this is a really good book and I can't wait for other chapters. good luck to the author!
I've read the whole 40 chapters of this thing, and hoo boy is it bad. And boring. (TLDR at the end) First of all, if you're expecting some excitement, action, romance, anything of the sort, it's NOT HERE. This is strictly a slice-of-life. I have no idea how this author manages to dodge every other genre except for, Idk, wish fullfilment?? Which is also interesting since the wish fulfillment part is not really all that satisfying. Story goes like this: MC gets money. Buys something. Steals from other guy. Buys something, etc, etc. Also, there's the occasional hook thrown here and there, only to be beaten up and abandoned in an alleyway somewhere. Why set up all these plot lines if you're just gonna throw them away? Every single character is one-dimensional. All the girls are caricatures. Beautiful caricatures, mind you. Plus, I don't get why the author feels the need to add all these beautiful figurines, then proceed to shy away from making the novel a harem. How, you ask? Simply by forgetting about the characters you spend 4-5 chapters reading about. I mean, aside from MC and his family, everyone's in danger of being abandoned. The system in this novel (yes, there's a system) is probably the most arbitrary, convenient piece of shit system I have ever read since Ultimate Scheming System (at least this novel fully embraces its trashiness and proceeds to be entertaining). If I had only one thing to say about the novel, it would be "waste". Everything feels like a waste. Waste of words, of characters, of a premise. Of time. And that's the largest crime a webnovel can commit. Making the reader feel like it's a giant waste of time. TLDR: Cluster**** of ideas author doesn't follow through with. Leave and don't look back.
this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah. i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizenso far very good introduction. i think i need to read more chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.
Unilke other people who like 3 types of characters this new MC is diffrent and has new refreshing personality it's great so far I have read 10 chapters. Concept is similar to Let Me Game In Peace in sort of cheat powers but this one is more system based. Anyhow author goood job and don't listen to fools keep up your originality.
first of this is a great novel, you have made this novel interesting but too much future information is making the novel hard to read after knowing where he will end up with his powers, if it's like that how about making it short and not too long but interesting in every chapter so one reads it repeatedly and be satisfied rather make more chapters and bore the reader, but all in all this is a great novel i love the different system of power it's refreshing seeing and reading something new unlike all these other repetitive novels, don't drop it keep it up 👍🔥you deserve all the stars but it's to motivate you 😂
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