Executioner's League

The plot looks very interesting to read but the execution needs to be done in a proper way. It feels rather rushed seeing the MC go through so much stuff at once.

Ooooh...i liked it...it's really a good story

I read your first novel, I can see that you're working in a similar genre and plot, I'm not saying it's bad. I actually like this types of story!

Nice work author please keep uploading !!!

Ok Translation. Story itself is as cliche as it gets. Worldbuilding is good, reminds me a bit of og Dragon Age

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THE END...!!!!???

'Young master, the great elder celebrates you!' The leader of the squad said as he and his squad bowed before Tor. 'Wait aren't those 'the fortress terrors'?' Asked one of the remaining mages who had fought the horde. 'you're joking right? What are they doing in this small village? And look they're bowing to that kid who killed the last elder.' Another observer stated in awe. Tor simply nodded at the praise the leader had delivered from the Great elder. 'Jin's core is damaged what do I do now?' Tor said clearly ignoring the cheering crowd as he looked straight to the leader for an answer since he knew Ter would have a solution for him. His sorrow and rage was still present which made the leader nervous. 'Reporting to young master, the great elder said to wait here for some time and you would get a fitting reply. Please you are to hand custody of the young lady to us.' The squad leader replied with his head down, but as soon as he raised it and wanted to walk towards Tor to take Jin, his eyes met Tor's and a shiver ran down his spine causing him to slide back and get in a defensive pose and his right hand grabbed the hilt of his blade. A second later he realised what he had just done and adjusted his posture to a bow again.'I am sorry I was being very disrespectful, please forgive me.' He said with his head bowed low. 'Tell uncle Ter i will protect Jin until I hear the solution.' Tor said in a calm voice as he turned around with Jin in his arms, headed for the 'Lightning Delights.'