The story has a good premise, but bad development. It was fine for him to act like a moron for the first 50 chapters but from then on it just became irritating.So you're left with that recycled garbage story of an 'amazing' character that solves other peoples servants without return. Before you try to refute, accepting goods and demanding goods are two different things.A possible defence to the author is that this is all in an attempt to drag on the novel; since he introduced numerous realms that have yet to be discovered. Even still, since said chapters aren't out yet, and this is purely speculation, it's a so-so novel.
to much non sense, this novel is realy cheap rip off of game descandent, he start to much trouble for himself out of nothing, when everthing can be solved by peacefull way. and this novel really lack of common sense, the just started yet he directly sell expensive equipment and skill before people di any mission. the author just to lazy to make what diffrence betwen game curency with world currency, 1 gold = 1$. like where silver and bronze coin?
I must say that this is one of my fav genre; Transmigration, modern (earth civilization), snowbiz (not yet shown, but I hope so). So yeah, it's sad when seeing this review section because just 1 guy reviewed it before I do.Maybe a little bias because it is literally just expressing my liking to the genre, but who cares. Anyway it's still early to tell the tales, so I can't say much of it.
I have truly been looking for a novel like this. A novel with a genius protagonist set in a modern world with minimal supernatural events involved. The writing quality is excellent, the stability of updates is alright, though I would rather have a chapter a day than 2 chapters every 2 days, the story development has been splendid so far as well, the character design is nice and the world is to my liking. All in all, very good. Please do continue writing.
Overall this story has blown me away! This is the best story I’ve seen in this whole app, having excellent grammar, quality content, hard working author, and so much more. I could go on for hours about how wonderful the character progression is, or the world building! I’d recommend this story to anyone who likes a fantasy, especially if you like a character that isn’t perfect in every way! Not to mention this author does something I rarely see from cultivating type stories, which is where the main character is not superbly overpowered, and grows faster than most, but not the fastest, thus making him much human, and much more entertaining to see him struggle, as well as rewarding, watching him succeed.
Overall I believe this is a genuinely good novel.The world building is done wonderfully and we come to learn more and more about what we need to know in due time.This brings me to the pacing of the story which is just right in my opinion neither too fast or too slow. The story is progressing well and through the story you'll come to know many sorts of people with their strengths and flows. They each have their way of life which makes them unique on their own. And due to that very reason their actions are very often linked to their vision and or prejudices. They are put in a situation where they are forced to grow in order to survive and through those events subtle change can be seen in the way they deals with whatever comes to them. World building, this novel takes place in a fantasy like Earth in the future following a first apocalypse and a virus that shift humans into monster. Humanity now lives mainly during the day as danger lurk during the night. A new world order is put in place where the population is dispatched into districts that basically are the remaining secure cities out there.Technology has gone through plenty breakthrough and is able to do quite a lot especially with the addition of magic or sorcery.I won't say much about grammar as i myself aren't that good in English but i can at least say that the author wrote the story in a way that makes it easy to understand what is going on. Now as for now i'd like to say first thank you for this enjoyable novel I believe that your work only needs more exposure to soar high. Secondly even if I didn't manage to point out things where you could improve I'm certain there is always a way to improvement and as such your story can only get better from now on if you continue the way you do. Hope this would help some to give some the push to read this work and the author the faith that his efforts hasn't gone unnoticed.
It's only the first chapter and the character development is solid. We get background on Kayden as the MC, reasons to root for him, and of course the mystery.Well, there are parts that feel a bit long-winded in explaining something, but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment of reading this novel.
T is novel too good. Almost couldn't believe eyes of my mine. have been finding move with mystery, action a. d love love MC finally found one. thanks you for writing his!
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