everyday // k.jn & m.ls

First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!

really enjoyed this book for it's creative way of thinking about your kindom orientation massive multiplayer online role play games. definitely recommend

This is definitely a hidden gem. Though it has an op protagonist, it uses it in a very good way. Definitely read this if you like a novel with gaming elements and a lazy but powerful protagonist.

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I read this novel until CH 48 and this is my review. Too much "F*cking" or "F*ck" words to read, I don't know who put that word, Author or someone else. As for me, read too much "bad words" become not comfortable to read and ruin a good character in the story, this what I think. Please improve writing quality and reduce "bad words" even more. This is a good story, I love the plot and I like the character, it will be perfect to reduce using "that" words.

Burrrr! This chilly 🥶 book is very well done and has a unique storyline that is hard to find. Longwei has got quite the adventure in store for him. I read all the free chapters before I even knew I had done so! Give it a try!

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Seems futuristic storyline at first few chapters. No after few chapters you will face school and vr story without anything interesting. You will face inconsistent characters and storyline with typical chinese novel powerup and win them all situations.