Eternal Undying Chronicles

We moved through the school to get to his locker, ducking under all the classroom windows so no one saw us. Luckily we made it over quickly thanks to him knowing all the short cuts in the school, I also now know a few. After we got to his locker he got his clothes changing while I kept watch for a teacher then we ran out of the school to one of the gardens of the school, "What are we doing here? I thought we were leaving the school?" I inquired.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

I got high hopes for this one at the beginning , but as I  progress passed ch 30s, I noticed the wording became robotic to me. Yes, it appears to be properly translated  but its lacking a bit of personality when I read it. Am I the only one who noticed it? 🤔

This is interesting! Because of the writing style I felt it light and was able to read easily and steadily which added more points to the story! It also consists of interesting twist! Though to be honest, though it's just my opinion, I would like to make the writing style more vivid and descriptive. That's just my opinion though but the writing style is already fine because it fits with the storyline

Good day my friend.  It's really an intriguing storytelling.  But you are delaying Samsons arrival, I want to see how he deals with those people.