Eternal Rebirth: The Rise of Clay Klient

It's a beautiful story and one of the best original fanfiction I've had in years. the only thing to say will be to have put the images of each girl, woman or character added because there are many characters from other manga or anime and for a person who has not seen or read all it is different manga that poses a problem of imagining what certain characters look like. Really hats off, it's a very good plot, I'm impatiently awaiting the continuation

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The book is really great and something new. It’s nice!

Guys, just want to remind you all that this novel has been dropped by the author. news source is from MTLNOVEL.you know, im sad that this novel have stopped updating since this novel is out on trial read.i thought it was because of tge author is resting but the fact is it was dropped. So if you guys don't want to read an incomplete novel, better not read this.

It's mediocre at best.The grammar is just bad and I cant say character design is any better.The dialogue is horrible it's just too one dimensional and the lack of simple common sense with any of the characters doesn't help.

I like it. It's pretty similar to The Novel's Extra and The Author's POV. Anyone who's read either can pretty much predict where the story is going to go, which isn't necessarily bad. I can't really say much when it comes to the world and characters because the novel is newer and there aren't a lot of chapters. Character development is really what makes these kinds of stories stand out from the rest; when storylines are similar, it's the characters that determine if the novel is good or bad. Both the world and the characters have room to grow.What really hurts this is the grammar. It's legible, and that's about it. Most of the people on Webnovel probably aren't real strict about grammar, but it's also clear where good grammar is what determines which novels people keep reading and which ones are dropped. A few things I'd like to point out: Run each chapter through Grammarly. The free version works very well. It's a great way to improve grammar.Periods go inside of quotes. I noticed this a lot in Ch. 17. It should be: "Blah blah blah." instead of "blah blah blah". The same rule is true for commas. A lot of the sentences are broken; it feels like words are missing.Finally, use commas. I see a lack of commas in a lot of novels. It's more of an experience thing, deciding where to place them, but reading well-written works helps with figuring out where to place them. I was taught to read each sentence out loud, and to put a comma where I naturally paused. Overall though, it's a good story with potential, worth a try if you like this kind of novel.

<p>Endless aura flowed out of their bodies and shot to all directions. Wherever the aura touched, all the bricks, rocks and pillars were destroyed, and all the houses alongside the street fell into ruins.</p>