I like the story so far. Great job mr. author.The only thing I don’t like is the MC character being inconsistent. Sometimes he is determined and acts like a normal grownup, sometimes he acts like a child being dragged by the nose by others.
Bias not included; this is obviously the greatest work of our era. Simply an incredible piece of art.Jokes aside, any suggestions, criticisms, plot deficiencies, or the like would be greatly appreciated.
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