Eternal Dusk: Monster Slayer

Wow,, this story is very unique.. Your writing structure and grammar are on point. This is an interesting journey and i love how the story starts and opens up... Great work

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It was good then the author got lazy and then changed the plot halfway through otherwise a decent story. ... .. ........ .. ....... .. ........ ......

Well can't say a lot since it has only a few charapter now, so my review probably isn't very accurate. However from what I've seen so far there could have some better word choices and the writing is a little ******* (not that I'm one to say, my English is also ****). It has promissing story, if the author does well, the chapters are little short but overall it's pretty good.

The story is interesting but it's still lacks more chapters. It's a good story if you can move the story a bit faster it would be great. Keep up the good work

Damn...i think its dropped

An average boy getting through highschool trying to make the best of it.

     As the ripples faded, so did the illusion of normalcy within his reflection. On his forehead a black triangle had formed, it's long base running along the top of his forehead and two short sides  came to a point just above the the bridge of his nose. Two pointed lines had appeared on either side of his face, starting in the space between his ears and his temple slanting down twords his cheeks.