Orginal start to the story would have been great but author purposely causes the mc to have ridiculous cheats that make him so OP it ruins the story just so the MC can ***** and moan till he gets restarted into a weak ass demon bad guy. I honestly hate it I liked the start and felt it had promise but the MC had a terrible personality. The MC acts so righteous talking about how he is a writer and can't handle a no plot story using his setting yet the dude wrote one story with a little over 400 chapters. This feels like a glossy plot hole whole story is annoying. I respect that the author tried i really do but honest opinion I hate this story with a passion for making me like its main setting to just flush the story down the toilet wipe your ass with it and say welp let's do over.
at around chapter 230 the story gets completely ruined, the story suddenly changes and everything makes no sense anymore, there's so many missing plot points, things get mentioned that never hhappened, characters go missing like they never existed in the first place. characters that have been in the story since beginning suddenly change and are unrecognizable anymore. for example the first disciple was a mortal cultivator which doesn't have any realms and doesn't rely on physiques, but then all of a sudden the eldest disciple has this heaven defying physique and he's also apparently in Emperor realm. and then they talk about how all of his disciples are in Emperor realm, which doesn't make any sense because before the sudden change there was only 1 disciple in Emperor realm, and on top of that if other had reached that realm the Mc shouldn't have known because they've been in a completely different world the whole time and there was no indication that they ever went back to the main world, so it should be impossible for them to have ever seen the other disciples let alone know their realm. The whole story is all messed up and ruined, and I thought it would fix itself after a few chapters but no, I went through over 70 chapters after the mess up, and it's still not fixed and I doubt it will ever be. So I'm dropping this story, and I recommend you all to not even bother reading it because if you actually enjoy it and you reach halfway you will just be completely disappointed and drop it anyways. Don't waste your money reading it
A thrilling beginningThe plot got me wanting more.I'm gonna stick with you author , don't relent I wish I could talk more about what I've seen so far but I'd keep commenting Accordingly....in each chapter that I find mind blowing
this sequel could be treated as an independent novel. Hua is a trained assassin with a mission to fulfill. Now, she infiltrates a big family as their lost child. would she be able to fulfill her mission?
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