Your Authoring Technique Is Seductive, Easily Drawing Readers Into The Moment. But I Think You Should Work On Your Dialogues A Bit, Cuz At Times I Can't Differentiate A Dialogue From An Inner MonologueBut Apart From This, I Love You! You're The Best!
The story is intriguing and fun, I'm only a few chapters in, but I enjoy reading it. The grammar needs improvement, but plot makes up for it. Good read, I'd highly recommend
It is not the best novel in the category if I must say so. Bad jokes, which pop out every next moment from the MC's mouth, and many repetitive moments, like exams, etc.Well, it may be worth reading for Indian readers (not everyone), at least for me. I'll be waiting for the updates.
A thrilling novel full of mystery. I've read the first two chapters, and I'm already eager for more. While the descriptions are somewhat weak, the strong dialogues and smooth flow of events more than make up for it.
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