My Man! What a crazy story! To tell the true..... this is the most innovative story i saw in the last months. Please do continue to surprise me author!!!!!!!
The story was well crafted by the author. The world building and intro gave a deep impression of the story and what will happen. I must say I am impressed! The portrayal of the scenes and the mc was also lit! Recommended for me! hehe [img=recommend]
Hi. The author here. This is a based of a world I have been creating for a long time. Gonna publish at least 3000-4000 words a week so be expecting 2-3 updates a week at first at least.
I know my writing is the weakest part of my novel, but I am extremely happy to get criticism since I want to improve on the parts I am lacking so if you find a grammar mistake can you tell me what mistake and where? It might be a one I didn't just spot or is just a mistake I have been repeating a lot.
Thank you all
The background of the story is pretty interesting, I didn't expect that. It change from the usual novel with basic background so it's quite refreshing to say the least.
The writing is pretty good and easy to understand. The grammar is probably the sole problem but it's something that you improve overtime so that's okay.
Anyway good job author :).
The story progression builds on classic 'Divine powers' system. And the setting of the main character is done pretty soon into the chapters.
There are a few grammatical errors which break immersion of reading a bit, but other than that it is a promising story.
In my opinion, the cover and the title are a little bit plain and the prologue is too short and didn't hook me quite much. I saw similar things like this before, about the adventure from the weak being to the god-like being or stuff. I read five chapters, I could say the writing style is quite nice, the character Rufus is really great. The plot and the setting of the world are quite decent.
Keep up writing, author. You did great so far.
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I know my writing is the weakest part of my novel, but I am extremely happy to get criticism since I want to improve on the parts I am lacking so if you find a grammar mistake can you tell me what mistake and where? It might be a one I didn't just spot or is just a mistake I have been repeating a lot.
Thank you all
The writing is pretty good and easy to understand. The grammar is probably the sole problem but it's something that you improve overtime so that's okay.
Anyway good job author :).
There are a few grammatical errors which break immersion of reading a bit, but other than that it is a promising story.
Keep up writing, author. You did great so far.