so I've only read the first 40 chapters but so far the main characters goldfinger doesn't quite make sense The idea is that it has a gene lock and so far all the main characters been trying to do is eventually have enough strength to unlock is gene lock but it's going to figure it lets him fuse monster DNA to get stronger put the monsters he choose seems to have no real logic I mean it pretends to have logic saying that he's using it to get stronger but there's no real reason why he chooses what he does choose also number values of strength don't seem to make much sense I mean oh I'll try his novels aren't great with numbers but still it always irritates me when they just seem very inconsistent
Read about ten chapters. It's a decent waste of time but if you have absolutely anything else to do, it's probably better.Initially, I was most interested in this novel.Big, imposing mechas and mech pilots in a cultivation world? A bunch of supporting characters to use those Mechs? Them betraying him only to have their newfound power taken away when they lose their mech? Sounds interesting!But no. First, the translator seems to think the plural of Mech is Meches. Which just looks stupid.Secondly, once reading the description of the Mechs, you will realize they're actually androids! It's a completely different concept entirely! Instead of powering up weak supporting characters, he instead pulls shallow and obedient NPCs out of thin air to do his bidding.The story seems pretty shallow. Every pretty woman has died and the MC assumes they are bad. There was no actual investigation done, or questioning. He goes straight into murdering people without a question, from day one, and seems like a pretty rough person.So if you want to see a man, alone, building up an army of androids with shallow personalities, written by a translator who doesn't seem to care, based off of an author's writing I suspect was really equally as bad, go ahead.Just don't expect anything crazy, and you can't be disappointed.
Great new work, different and new that just got me hooked on 12 chapters. Got to see what happens next in the future and definitly waiting for next chapters daily like other books you have.
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
After reading the first chapter , I liked the flow in your story. The plot is also interesting and the characters development is also good. keep up your good work and I hope you will get a contract soon. Definitely recommend your story.
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