Entertainment Circle Ancient Female General

OOF  Lee is mad! But Scarlett is right serves him right! I can't wait to see how this fight will go! Amazing job, I have so much fun catching up on your stories! You're such a great author!

Got to chapter 13 before I dropped it, the world is simply too logically flawed.The way the MC received his upgraded powers was total rubbish. I ignored that thinking maybe story will get better.The love rivalry came off way too strong and forced in the early chapters, then the whole plot was resolved in span of 2 chaptersIn chapter 13 it mentions hot weapons like guns became obsolete as the mutated beasts adapted, yet somehow bow and arrow still works.MC is just an OP idiot in a world full of idiots

One of the best novels with Op mc and background just to my liking. Just hope the story won’t develop like those cliche novels. MC right now is not bad, I mean he ain’t like those arrogant fools who go around offending everyone though this mc’s background is op tis not invicible after all and his backing can’t fight against the world alone, he is rational not like those trash who lose  themselves out of a little provacation, not like those prideful or face valued fools  that don’t know how to take a step back leading to a disaster, at least now he ain’t like those pathectic and rightheous or evil mcs who would go around causing unecessary troubles and being chased like someone who deflowered the heavenly emperor’s favorite daughter which shoulda never happened b/c things aint got nothing to do with them , not lustful like those harem seeking idiots etc. Hey, i just hope that after The Dao heart trails he get sublimated in hist mental state and mood, become calm like ancient well and restrained. In the cultivation world benefit is paramount, i don’t even know why 99.9% of transmigrators always neglect this fact. It is not like they don’t know, they read countless novels and knows almost everything they should be the calmest and low key people out of all in the cultivation world. Although sometimes things are not controllable, many troubles can still be avoided, most of them be face slapping, short tempered, proud, domineering to the point of stupidity, after money, woman and immediate power saying “ I wanna pretend like my fellow transmigrators” This is absurd, why should you be like them just because you have the same origins and do brainless things without getting any benefits, later they get angered full of resentment by being betrayed by their so called woman or the one they trusted the most at critical moments when they already know ‘trust’ don’t exist in cultivation world ofc their good parents is an exception but cannot even be absolute trust in them; the human heart is unpredictable as long the benefit is worth the loss even the so called bottom line can be broken, the holy saint can become the devil. Only few of the MCs put their knowledge from earth to use and Use the heaven and earth as the chess board, sentients beings as chess pieces and making use of those fools who can’t control the greed in their hearts, calculating the heavens and playing a game of chess with heavenly dao and the opponents. In short MC can’t get too emotional and let emotions affect his mood and decions otherwise he should go be a mortal and live some life under the threat of death at anytime since mortals are ants.Anyways, this novel starting is good, just hope that it won’t develop in a disappointIng direction. More chapters need.

heyo crazy cronie here,review on 27/09/2021 @chap 172(released chap till date: 189)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) SHORT REVIEW: You read Dual Cultivation? Yeah, very similar to that, just a little more drama included and the number of harem is quite less compared to DC, tho the no of chaps are less as wellAnd yeah the story is hella fast. LONG REVIEW: writing: 8/10There are mistakes here and there. Grammatical, Typos and all, though nothing that might hinder your experience. Welp the best thing is author corrects any mistake whenever pointed out, so yeah.update: 10+6/10^ If anyone read any of my reviews previously they would know I always want 7 chap/week for 10/10 rating. This one releases minimum 14 so a +5 for it.^ Another +1 because author gives extra chaps when PS goals are met.plot: 7/10^ This one is a good time pass read. For harem suckers (like me) this one would definitely be good.^ -0.5 because sometimes you might feel plot jumps from here to there and it's so fast it's difficult to comprehend^ Another -0.5 because there are some scenes which might trigger readers. That's not me because I read pretty dark $h!t. But others would be triggered. As I said this is an unbiased review so everything will be accounted for.^ A -1 because of exaggeration. For ex *spoiler* Mc is a clean freak. But his girls somehow messed the room. Mc founds out and he gets angry that he threatens to kill them if they don't clean his room within an hour or so.Some might say it's a joke but it isn't because mc can resurrect them even if he kills one.And I'm saying this might be said as a joke, but it's really a bad humor.*Spoiler end*characters: 8/10 ^ I like the characters here personally tbh. They have their own quirks and personalities.^ Then why -2? First -1 It's mainly because how fast women fall in love with mc. Now I know this is a dual cultivation novel but since I have this criteria so...^ secondly, another -1 because how no characters have any character development. But as I said this is dual cultivation novel so just -1. pacing: 7/10- Honestly, pacing was pretty fast.  dialogues: 9/10^ mostly all criterias this time got 8 huh. Welp tbh the is not a realentertainment: 9/10 Now this is a biased criteria. This is solely based on me. And I indeed enjoyed the novel? How much?? I had to stay awake at night to read this one (since I'm pretty busy during daytime.)Overall: 4.6/5~4.5/5 (WN rounding up)CC rants:-There are some extras which I didn't mention above... Or didn't have the right criteria so here it goes^ Firstly I love how author uploaded girls pics during their intro which most authors do not do. They always ^ Author is interactive and replies to as many comments as possible. This is also the reason why author knows any mistakes he made in a chapter (typos, grammatical,etc) and he corrects it.^ *spoiler* Now this is amusing but the cultivators not only have western & jap name but also wear modern clothes. Yeah modern...*Spoiler end*^ And..... That's it. Keep uploading 🌚CONCLUSION:A very good fun read novel which uploads twice daily. If you're a fan of Dual Cultivation, heck, if you're a fan of harem genre then do read this!!!!And author-chan don't forget to pin this xDWARNING:  *SPOILER*The start is very similar to Dual Cultivation. So if you ain't a fan of DC then don't read this, since it would be just a waste of time.

Those first chapters were so bad that I don't even feel like reading it further.The logic about him being fat, his reasonings, and ffs, what an annoying character.

One of the best harem story with satisfying chemestry between characters. It also has a unique cultivation system for you to enjoy, so go ahead.

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author has a good command of language, a few grammatical errors but of course it is a new novel and will be edited. An interesting plot of cultivation that has a lot of potential to become one of the greatest on this site. the characters, and their backgrounds are well thought out, and definitely will keep a reader intrigued. best of luck to the author, keep writing🤗