Elementals; The Awakening

unbelievable it was very unbelievable. This novel is on a whole different level.I stumbled here upon chance. The story is good from the start but when I reach chapter 20+ all turns arbitrary and seems the story direction is very poorly planned. What the use of level 2000000 if the IQ is very low. I can't believe I just wasted my time reading this. I understand the premise of the story and it's definitely something other readers would like, but it's not something that I would read past 30 chapters.I rate it  5 stars. Let's try if the Author will delete this rate of mine. Because I heard that they could delete this if they don't like the review.

Loving how the story slowly plunges you into the world of the Reyeses and Hernandezes. All the clichés of telenovela spun with a modern twist that keeps it fresh and inviting!

OK storyline. Funny moments, but too many filler chapters. The moment any significant occurrence develops in the plot, each chapter is stretched about six times its length with pointless nothingness. You can literally skip 5 chapters and miss NOTHING, or condense what it says into 3 or 4 paragraphs. The author is destroying his own novel like this

{I will just say that for the sake of fairness.}In the first 100 chapters or so, I was thinking about how to make a review of the annoying things inside the novel...but now I don't think I need to do that............................................For the first few chapters, you will get a feeling similar to those  xxx based novel (like The MC was just going to collect women to xxx after that with some lose storyline and cheesy dialogue between the MC and those 1 or 2 dimension women) but after more than 50 chapters I get to understand the difference and the hidden beauty of this novel it completely has no relationship with the first impression you get, it's starting with the typical way of other xxx novels but after few chapters, you get a glimpse of great story, you can even see the difference between each disciple and their feeling and come to understand the MC more and know why he would do this, and sometimes you will find how annoying the second disciple when she disrespects him even though he is the master but eventually you found the reason for all that and then come to an astonishing discovery and it was all about a beautiful story filled with romance and comedia to be able to get a family and building feeling...yes there are many disciples and all of them had a regular xxx with the MC but each one of them had been hiding her insecurity deeply inside their hearts and even the MC will have some enlightenment about his feelings and his thinking about them. Simply it is about how they will grow to truly love each other, and build their forces and family.And the most important part of all this is that there will be no young arrogant master here and there at least not in the same way and even when you think that the MC is going to have a hard time ahead of him you will find that all this worry is for nothing.....because all those supposed to be a dangerous situation ends up with unexpected ways with much damage to the MC.In the end, it's a beautiful and lighthearted novel with much love and xxx.

The book had potential with the interesting world building and pretense. But for me it falls short, 60+ chapters in and find it confusing. It's far to relaxed and at times lacking specifics and details

good book keep it up the pace seems nice and it's a nice book.

As Heaven said this, he started to leak enormous amounts of energy. It seems he was detonating his heavenly core, hoping to take Tyler with him! Seeing this, the Great Way decided to join him, and decided to detonate his cultivation. Only Earth/Nature, who hadn't spoken yet didn't do the same. Tyler was intrigued and looked at Earth/Nature saying;

I felt something cold as I woke up there was a ice bag in my arm as I saw Andrew putting an ointment on  leg... 'What happened? ' I questioned myself as I sat up quietly.