Element withing: chaos heir

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: Elohor_Great
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Hickory48
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    pretty good novel so far. the overall idea of the story is executed nicely without being written like the typical cultivation novel. maybe the pace of a story is a tad bit slow, but if you could keep regular updates (maybe daily?) i can see this novel have great success, or maybe this last part of the pace and updates can just be my wishful thinking and overall preference. anyway keep up the good work and hope to see more
  1. Rerian
    Rerian rated it
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    Yeah i personally dont recommend.Overall the novel is alright but for what you have to pay its definetly not worth it.The MC is ridiculously dumb for someone that reincarnated with his memories. Hes also the very definition Of a hyprocrite, he has abilities he doesnt make full use off. He doesnt have any actual goals, way more reactive than proactive.There no Romance as of chapter 200. well there are intrest I guess but how stupid the MC is doesnt even make sense he gets into a relationship.This novel is a backup novel to your backup novel, there isnt one momsnt as of chaptee 200 that leaves you statisfied or makes you want to read more. i lIterally got thos far because Im waiting fot Othrt novel updates.Even though my review isnt great this novel is better than the majority of beast tamer novels on here just have to kinda Have To have nothing Else To read.
  1. WHisPERS2
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    I've always been a sucker for cultivation novels and this one, so far, has quite an interesting premise. Although the synopsis is vague and didn't give much info about the story, it was captivating enough, especially the opening sentence.Writing quality is good. There are some mistakes but it didn't disturb my reading experience. One thing I really like about the writer's way of writing is his simple words that flows so well. His way of storytelling is comfortable in the eyes and easy to understand. For the story developement, the pace is quite slow in my opinion but fortunately, the plot has started to reveal itself in the latest chapter, which is ch 8. There's a little plot twist in the last ch, which I find quite surprising and entertaining, making me have the urge to read more. I'll be looking forward for your next chapter so good luck, Author!For the world background, can't judge much as it was still in its early chapter but overall, it's quite okay. We get to be introduced a bit about the world, the realms it has, and the background of mc's family. As for the character development, the story, despite being a 3rd pov, is written in the view of the mc. His thoughts and emotions are fully exposed to the reader which I thought is a good and efficient way to make readers feel closer to the mc. And the story background of Fang Yan, which I assume will be the main villain of the book, has been introduced quite early. So for the character development, I think the author has done a fairly good job in this aspect. Well, that's the end of my review. Hope that this will help attract readers for you, Author! I've run out of ps for today but I'll make sure to give you some tomorrow! Thanks for the wonderful story! Keep up the good work!
  1. itarotchi9gz
    itarotchi9gz rated it
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    Why are there only 40 chapters?  Has anyone had raw for this?
  1. Ethanquiv
    Ethanquiv rated it
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    I had a big review but I accidentally pushed the back button, now I don't care, all I have to say is that the MC can't cultivate ever again and is just a mortal with a big(and broken) soul who can 'supposedly' as the author says it "cultivate in the new way" which is basically just non-sense about using runes... a.k.a talismans, which MC was the king of...But now it seems I'm gonna have to deal with this ****ty package they've left behind, whatever
  1. BigMun
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    I see “f*ck” a lot of times 😂 I’m not very good at giving reviews but I enjoy what I’m reading and I hope that you’ll continue writing well.
  1. hotpapichulo
    hotpapichulo rated it
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    I'll just have to reach the next stage then!
  1. LamenThiefqxa
    LamenThiefqxa rated it
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    Lycan replied "The is no one truly immortal, if you're asking me to make you ageless even that is too hard for someone of our level but possible. Remember my word Orichimaru as I will only tell you this once, even gods can be killed and the world be destroyed its all the amount of time you posses. I have a method to become ageless but I am smart but not a researcher, I need your help in that matter. If your are able to complete this task then I can promise you 500 year of life expectancy and if you are able to help me reach my goal more than 10,000 years of life expectancy. The choice is you're to make but remember I will use a seal which can kill you in 10 days if activated, to control your impulsive desire."
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