I love this story. Simple as that. But since the beginning of the 5th volume the story has been dragging on and on. It's been a good 240ish chapters since its beginning and we're at the start of volume 6 now (at least for the 'free' chapters) and I can honestly tell you about 1 major arc that lasted a good 70 chapters that I consider actually progressing the plot while keeping the story interesting. Besides that, and a few other chapters I could honestly consider 150 of these chapters filler waste that no-one will truly remember.
Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.
The story from chapter 1 to 9 had an interesting story but after that the story starts to get boring and tangled a lot since in 10 ten chapters not a day has passed
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Damn it, they know now where Xiyan's inheritance papers is..... No No No how could they hit her..... Yunshen please save her......I hope Xiyan will tell Yunshen everything and not choose to hide from him for sometime later......
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