Eden Transmigration

This review is focused on the free chapters of the novel. I do like the story a lot. The verse is very strong but the underlying story seems to more of mc progress to become the best harem protagonist ever. So yes i do assume that later on this will have a lot of pokemon collection since him gaining more wives and complete love routes give him more Lore Abilities which are basically cheats. Lore abilities are like Development skills from danmachi which you have a random chance of gaining with level up after your excella stuff gets filled with feats. This novel also have that type of system to grow.Mc is a 5 year old child atm so don't expect any smut for a long while. Its looking like a novel that would focus more of slow life aspect that power fantasy.A little bit about the verse.. how should i say, this is a broken verse which takes inspiration from Theology of biblical God and probably more. i am not well versed in this aspect, but since there is a being that completely is like God/Allah and or Tirumati of Hinduism ig. you will know when you read about Losdeus and how he is described in the story. With just this entity alone and how Kalpanas world was describe, it doesn't take a genius to see how absolutely broken of a verse this author has made. and its not even like those other powerfantasy type of novesl which create realms and relams and ridiculous numbers being thrown at you to make it sound op. As the mc is a child, a lot of interaction he has with the clear love interests to have that child monoton. Mc is an isekai protag so, ig he is similar to Rudy in this department.Overall if you are fine with big harem as the main premise and plot, give this a try.

Love the introduction, the roller coaster ride of emotions within and the suspense plus the drama makes it quite interest.

This novel is wonderful, however the grammar is not so goodI started it sometime ago and I’m happy I didn’t drop it It’s an amazing novel with unexpected twists and unending action But the author should try and get an editor or improve the writing quality

The potion has a shiny gold color and shines like all other potion.

Resisting the pressure exerted by Helge Desert, Havel scrambled to sit up and look around.

     'Will he look at me like a monster too?' he found himself thinking. He never wanted to see someone he cared about look at him with such cold eyes. "You can quit trying to hide it Casious, who do you think dragged you back home" Blushing in embarrassment, he stopped his frantic scamble for his tunic. "Listen to me Casious, I don't know what those things did to you, but whatever happened, I might be able help you" Calming down, Casious could only listen further. He was scared and he had no idea what was going on. On top of it all his grandpa, whom he had doubted, was trying to help him.

"You look breathtaking, Zion will fall head over heels for you" I rolled my eyes. We heard the sound of doorbell it must be him.

I will still be updating my CCG novels though because that one takes up significantly less effort and time to write. Like about 1/10 the effort o.o. Yeah, the difference is that much...