Eclipse of the primogenitors

  • Genre: Sci-fi
  • Author: MyDick_Heals
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Free1198
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    This Needs Serious Editing before becoming readable ! So many grammatical mistakes ! World background is almost non-existent ! Too much focus explanations on every useless thing(explanations mostly are all boring so they must explain necessary stuff and shorten it as much as  possible leaving place for plot, but here its complete opposite), but when it comes to about necessary things giving explanation about how mc chose and worked in his now chosen profession with all damn time skips and especially power levels there is None. Since they were in orphanage there was never mentioned what power levels they reached accurately and on what power levels were their enemies. Action and Skills needs also huge improvement and better explanation, but with this horrible writing quality everything is Useless, Unreadable !
  1. TheLONGnose
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    I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books.
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  1. DRegalInsomniac
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    yes, starting is not bad need to see more
  1. ROMANUS
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    N.K. realised what he said.
  1. queenovhearts
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    "Oh yes, you can show me my status, Darren said.
  1. TouchofDarkness
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    After figuring this out the photographic memory came in handy real quick as I didn't have the rout out but as they took me out for the materials I was counting my steps and turns which created a map in my head for later use wile also simultaneously thinking about my new found IQ and Ability.
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