Echowake

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Alright. Before I get into the review, I want to speak on how long I subtly and directly put off reading this novel because of the other reviews. About 3 weeks ago I believe is when I first added this to my library, but the reviews put me off. During this time, naturally I read many other novels, and reviewed even more. Today I decided that I would give this novel a chance, and what do you know? The negative reviews have to be created by people with a waterlogged brain. ColumbusOhio raises complaints about the lack of special training of units despite knowing the war is coming and the treatment of the MC’s mother toward his father despite what happened (will try not to spoil). The first part is simply answered with: Resources. They don’t have an infinite holy grail to raise people. The next is simply human greed. Humans are always shitty, you can count on that, even during times of near-war. As for his mother; this is just….men who have power tend to always treat women poorly. Even in our world this is true throughout history. It’s expected that a woman still performs her “duty” even if the father cuts down his son and eats his heart. Although the father is not to that point, that’s just the expectations of women. Learn and be better idk. Sea_detective_85 and DJ_Titus have nearly identical complaints and they are the primary reason I put off reading this novel for so long, and they, in my opinion, severely undermine and give awful reviews.           Yes, the MC is in a forest for a long time. No, he can’t “just leave the continent” you seem to have not paid attention or underestimate the problem of leaving the forest.       No the brother is not “basically the MC”. I’ve read past when he gets out of the forest, and we saw plenty of Damien, Damon, and overarching events. I usually also dislike time spent away from the MC, but I found it was done pretty well here.      It’s incredibly common for MCs to go on training arcs where they have no one to talk to, yet it’s suddenly a problem here?      Also, everyone else is getting the MC treatment? Genuinely I’d like to say some very unkind words towards this person’s intelligence. The MC in the current chapter of where I am has dwarfed his younger brother and everyone I have met, except for the obvious older generation. Slight spoiler; Damon has slayed 50ish monsters, with the majority being mana beasts and demons accounting for 12 I think. Damien has killed well over a thousand of both at this point. Academies are good and all, but flowers grown in greenhouses don’t always last in the wild.My only real complaint is that there are some spelling typos within the novel which I can easily read past, and that i’m running out of chapters :(

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Came here from the plot, stayed for the destructive maid

I read the first few chapters and I liked it. Your work seems interesting, keep up and continue writing.

Ha-ha-ha😂, the summary is funny. At first I thought the story was purely comedic, but when I read the story I discovered that there is depth, and that the world of the story that has been revealed so far seems vast.👍

Its a master peice . Read it for yourself

its an interesting read, have potential, keep it up posting. Best of luck finishing tre story.