SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!! Well I enjoy the premise of the story and I quite like Samuel as a character. However I feel it would have been better for him to wait awhile to atleast settle down and actually enjoy having a “father”&”mother” etc. In the first 30 chapters alone he’s gone from being blind to adopted to straight publishing a book now talking about starting a company, it feels very rushed especially considering he’s only been adopted for 1-3months (inc mini timeskip’s) that’s also not considering the fact he’s 10 years old. Well just thought I’d give my opinion i enjoyed what I have read so far.
Yeah...the grammar is a little bad. Inconsistencies in using first person and third person are confusing. I just hope that your (author) future chapter more focus on trying to give a fighting chance to humanity, meaning developing weapon, technologies, martial art sect or magic academy not just MC trying to become strong alone. Even superman cannot be at two place at once. So built a fucking army.
It's a pity. the story was decent but just so random.I also don't see myself spending a single SS on this story.There is alot to improve before signing a contract lol.
"Correct, your highness," Frasier said with an apologetic look. "The Shinjuku ward is right next to the Concession and thus significantly reduces the distance that would need to be traversed in order to deliver supplies. In addition, there is a hospital campus especially suited to our needs."
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