Echos of The Lost Realm

This girl/guy (Idk which) is like my favorite auther they wrote dreadful radio show which is one of my top 3 books of all time you never know what's gonna happen next a guy who seems crazy is normal a normal guy is a ghost a guy who's a ghost is alive it never stops

Hi guys just want you to know that Im doing this for fun and in no way am i good in writing so sorry if there is spelling or grammar mistake. I trying my best with this fan-fic so hope you enjoy

well, the mc is just basically clueless of how strong he is. and the others dont tell him cause theyre misunderstainf everything. wonder when will the mc realized hes so strong? it can get really old really fast.

Mmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmmm

This is a intersting story from what has been written so far. I am intrested in what will happen next. What I say is my opion and suguestion to help your book become better so please don't take it the wrong wayFirstly for me, It was not scary. When I read Horror/Thiller books with are nomarly Steven King. I want to be right there with the MC expericing the horror and the diolage that is written now if given more details to the world and the backround to make me feel like i am there can work. The chapters that you repeated the same dilolage twice is a clever use of diloage and can be used if it is altered in such a way that it is from the other persons perpesive.  In genreal this is a good book and has the potional to be a great horror book " If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot" Stephen King

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

While still currently busy eating their meal, their attention was suddenly taken by a sudden event from the distance, the main door connecting the cafeteria to the hallway slammed open and out from it came twelve individuals walking side-by-side.

Kuroka shook her head. "No, I'll bring her back, but," she hesitated. "Could I ask for just a few more hours alone with her?"