Major plot holes in the prologues which is already a red flag. Many more plot holes are in the story and even though the MC wrote the story and characters, he blames them for being rude. Some small grammar problems. It just gets rather boring trying to ignore all the plot holes. And how hypocritical the MC is.
I don't want to be shameless. To be honest, I'm only writing this for fun and forging my English. If you have problems with it, I don't care. If you don't like it, then don't, no one is forcing you to read it. If you want to trash talk my novel, spare me from that.Goodluck at reading this crappy novel.
The basic themes and plot of the story is very interesting. I love sci fi and the superhero stuff, but the writing style was not really what I am used to. And I read a lot so this made it harder for me to keep up. In certain scenes, further researching can be very helpful.But these are just my thoughts, all the best for future (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
"It's been a while, Rei" It licked her fingers and rubbed it's head against her hand remembering she was it's master's special person, by purring and shamelessly acting cute it managed to crack a small smile in Liu Lian's eyes. Turing to the prince who stared in shock at the docile tiger her eyes were cold once again.
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