Hi, this is Serialeater, the author of this story. Now, even though my name may not inspire you to read this, do give it a try and I will try my hardest to make it worth your time. It is my first time writing, so please give me suggestions even if it's already good enough *wink*. And for the last time, it's not called soccer, it's called football. Now go on, read it. It's time for me to eat, ahem, I mean write.
The idea is really good just needs more polishing in writing and stroy telling. It would had been better to know more about mc in the first chapters. There are times that need more explaining about the things happening but overall all of it can be fixed or with enough time it could be better than now. Keep it up author. Take care.
author can you give a link of discord? ....................................................................................................................
I am unbelievably sad that i didn’t see that it had only 49 chapters so far, if i had know i would have waited for it to finish so i dont have to sait to read it! This book is amazing and I hope it can get more chapters soon!
Amrynn's words seem to go in one ear and out the other. Eldred continued to shake him viciously. His eyes were harsh and a look of intent to kill was in them. Amrynn frowned at his fellow elf and put his hand on one of Eldred's wrists. The hand started to glow slightly, then there was a yelp from Eldred and he immediately backed off.
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