Author-san here, shamelessly giving my review!❤❤ This time, my system might have taken a turn for the worst🤣🤣 But oh well, wouldn't its host be able to handle it?Hope you all love it! Enjoy!🤩🤩
This story was off to a decent start, with only a few inconsistencies, but it quickly went downhill from there. The author introduces several new elements to the story, only to suddenly remove them, as if he decided to suddenly change the direction of the story, with so apparent purpose, but the biggest issue I had with the story is the redundant info. In almost every chapter there are one or more entirely redundant paragraphs that either told me absolutely nothing or something that's so obvious a toddler wouldn't need it explained, and as a result I found myself skimming/skipping a lot of the story, and probably missing some of the important stuff. Author should really work on prioritizing what info to keep along instead of padding the story in excess, i.e. a full paragraph of monsters nearing the camp, but MC just had to release his aura so it wasn't a problem anyway. If it wasn't a problem anyway, don't bother telling people about it.
PLEASE PUBLISH THIS ALREADY!!!!!!! Although I don't know the reasons for this novel to be dropped, I still believe that this novel should be given a second chance. So please start translating this again, I BEG YOU!
This is a story that will be almost daily updated, and it will be more frequently updated if it's liked.I won't say much because you can check yourself whether you like the story or not. Any comments, thoughts, ideas and complaints are more than welcome.Don't forget to add this book to your library and hit that power stone button.
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