Echoes of a Forgotten Life"

I hope this is different from other plots, pls make the female lead hard to get.. not always going back to male lead when they show remorse... make her strong willed , male lead to work hard to get her back.... how about second chance male lead, it seldom happens... not always FL to end up with ML

This is a better premise for base system story. However grammarb is terrible words not making sense at times. Gender of characters sometimes incorrect. The unit of measurements way to exaggerated. Example given away 5 tons of water per person.  For people to be poor no way they could transport that much water let alone store it. I would go back and proofread thoroughly.

This sh!t should be good if you don't include the female teacher who constantly harassing MC everytime she meets him and MC who just keep accept the abuse and saying "she's good girl and good seedling to become an alchemist

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UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭                                                                                                               

The world is intricate and vast, there is so much yet to be discovered but I'm drawn in every chapter, Who is the Conqueror, what is each characters puurpose? Well each chapter release has me beyond excited, I hope everyone gets the opportunity to read this!

Yay author-san is backSure hope they could find another human...Alive and safe that is;3

"I think you killed it Eminos?"