Dungeon Master: Sovereign of the Infinite Labyrinth

"Maybe your too tired and need rest or its the island, the island made you see things its a white rabbit?" John replied

-Kato that ... that was also our last kiss-avowed, unable to avoid the heat of his eyes, tears sliding down her face and hideously painful lump in her throat.

Wala na siya, Wala na ang babaeng mahal na mahal ko.

Yuno just shrugged off and walked away. He was obviously showing off to Asta how far away he was in comparison to Asta being a prominent Wind Magic user etc.

"Why is that? You're just at home, it's hard to work," said the bagas softly

Instead I tried to concentrate on the path ahead. The woods were silent, except the shrill cry of a cicada and the occasional hooting of an owl. The carnation petals had been strewn from my threshold and ended here.

No offense, but I'm going to be honest this time author.You introduces a lot of alternative terminology to enrich the narrative and expand the world-building, and I think that's good. However the problem is, it was way to abrupt for me. This kind of transition may leave some readers feeling disoriented. A more gradual integration of these new terms will be a better way to enhance the reader's immersion and understanding.Example, instead of suddenly introducing unfamiliar words without context, you might consider weaving them into the dialogue or descriptions more organically. This would be a better approach to allow readers to acclimate the new vocabulary, so it'll smooth like a butter to read. Another is, when the man at the first episode, who's name is Lord katsura, decides to call him 'Lucy the silver hammer', it was way too sudden bro. as if he seen a weak kid, abruptly think he smart to understand the situation, and then like, ah, you are a kind of a hero boy, I name you Lucy the silver hammer instead of Lucian. I don't know if the Japanese or Chinese will make it sounds cool, but this is English, it is better for author to follow the context at hand. And, to construct the narrative in a more engaging way is definitely way better than just dumped the info without a preceding the even to build momentum. as a writer myself, I want a critic that served to improve my writing. hope author don't get offended by this, and sorry I kinda busy with my job, so I won't lengthen this whole review. overall, while few thing perhaps need to be improved by the author, the story itself had a significant potential to go far, especially the idea about, Tama: the sacred jewels etc.kyuketsuki: some kind of demon or monster(in chp1) trying to possess the mother. Tama artist and many more. It was a new concept that is intriguing. Do give it a try!?

Wow this is one of the most interesting book I've read, the story pace is fast and doesn't leave one hanging. kuddos to the author.