“Dumped, the Beijing Circle Prince Quickly Marries Her”

Let’s be honest, this novel is a unique novel but not the rare one. I like this kind of pet-shop-cultivation-novel but later I had gradually became so disappointed when I read the raw. The tittle novel is “Astral Pet Shop” but this novel hardly mentioned the development of the shop, they didn’t even sell the astral pet but only selling food pet and training customer’s astral pet. That’s all.What’s about the mc? Geeeh, mc is arrogant and a bit madman. Instead how to develop his own shop, mc is rather provoked every big families. He is smart but no wise. He chose to enter the outside secret realm with the risk of one time death when the system already provides him with many secret realms with endless death. The only thing he need is a little bit time, he just need to wait patiently and accumulation of money from shop but he ends up running into the greater risk and provoked some big figures.Seriously, the more i read the more disappointed i became and gradually i lose interest then I drop it.The concept itself was very good and unique but author made this novel to became so cliche. The side characters were even more worst then the mc’s. Overall rate: 5/10

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

yamite kudadasai.......... ahhhhh ahhhhh ahhhhhhh.............. sugoi................ .......................................................

Dropped after 5 chapters. My main reason for dropping is, too many unnecessary sentences, showing mental thought of mc. Unnecessarily increasing the word count by at least 4 times. All that stuff of 5 chapters could have been done in one chapter of same length.

One of the funniest novels I've looked at in a while, and it's a pretty interesting take on a saturated genre. I love the comedy, I just like to imagine walking into this guy's house and seeing hundreds of dakimakuras lining the wall. There are some grammer mistakes, but the writing more than makes up for that

Story sound awesome. But in my opinion, too many wish is not good. All the mc need is high intelligence. being smart enough too build his own AI. building a farm where no one could touch like a valley surrounded by the radiation watsteland and probably monster. mc is smart enough to build a teleporter allowing access to him and anyone he allow. removing two wish and making it fit more into the world. i don’t really like how something unnatural is pushed into the world. A supernatural power that can’t be explain squezed into a sci story.

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The synopsis sounds good and the first chapter is very well written. Saved to read for future reading when more chapters are released. Can’t wait for this to be out!!!