overall, it's a good story with many redeeming points that others focused on (thus my rating of above 4).There is one thing though that I hope the author can work on improving, and that is the pace of the story!the main character is op in every aspect (cultivation speed at least 3x of others, talent, op mana control/absorption, resources, teachers ...) except his abysimal starting point, yet by chapter 200 he still didn't reach the starting point of his friend who was in a backwater island. how you may ask ? it's because of the horrible pace. in 200 chapters there are less than 200 days elapsed in story time! in order to keep the mc as the underdog (since the mc will exceed most his local peers in months) author decided to cram many events in a short timeline which in my opinion is a horrible decision.the story had/has a lot of potential, there is the survival within man kind, the exploration of other continents taken by other races, the exploration of the rifts, exploration of other planets .... yet by chapter 200 we are still at starting point with mc barely at begining of the 2nd realm. (please note human race has at least 6~7 realms and they are a weak/young race in the setting of the story. His friend was a this realm by the time of the awakening...)I have seen many stories that get abandoned by authors or get dropped by too many readers because author keeps the story in early game which makes it boring. I wish new authors would target stories to be finished by few hundred chapters instead of thousands.so author if you read this, please pick up the pace. we don't need every day of the main character to be a chapter and certainly not dragging early realms over hundred of chapters otherwise you will either lose your motivation/inspiration or your readers (which ever comes first). also there is no need to make it repetitive, too much of any trope kills a story. you wrote several arcs of mc being underdog, you can spice it up by adding arcs where he explores (no pressure against intelligent peers) arcs where he dominates, arcs where he keeps low profile and hides his assets, arcs where he hides and is hunted, arcs where he focuses on side jobs, romance.... choices are countlessps: this is not to undermine the story, its merely my opinion in what could have made this a master piece. peace
frankly , it's a really good novel and it's obvious that the author definitely has some knowledge and an interest in wrestling. the way the mc is portrayed is very realistic and I like how everything didn't just fall into his lap. The novel is definitely one of my favorites
I'm currently in the 70+ chapter (ty for raws) and so far I have no major complaints. MCs IQ is somewhat above average, side characters are not braindead and help move the story forward, enemies have a brain too, sense of humor is OK. So far I also haven't seen any nationalism or racism. This one is really the best of this week and an overall great time killer... Solid 4/5 from me.
I genuinely have no idea who anyone is or what is even going on. This is just not readable. That’s all there is plain and simple. It’s not readable or understandable to anyone.
gives me terror infinity vibes (dude gets teleported into different scenarios) but his golden finger is his proficiency panel. also the synopsis is lying when it says he learns basic swordsmanship instantly, he had to train for a month so at least he aint a genius.*spoiler* the annoying rich guy gets killed. 👍
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