Dream Breaker

Hi, this is Yorasu. I am the translator of this novel, Godly Model Creator.Some of you might have already known about this. From now on, GMC will be dual hosted both in Webnovel and Gravitytales.Hope fellow readers here enjoy this novel just as much as I do. :)

Story is really good but there are occasional crammar and spelling mistakes. Character degelopment is decent but mc’s emotions are just all over the place and don’t machup with regular behavior and also the context of the situation. Overall a really good story MC needs some work

You're a staring my eyes the I feel in love with it from the very 1st line it's pure and original I hope you dig deep making it breath taking

The story is pretty good. One of the better ones among Chinese Novels. But it has its own collection of problems. Translation : It is readable,  but many sentences have lost their meaning among translation. Some words are misinterpreted,  while others are in wrong place. I am not sure,  whether it's translation error or writing error. For example,  the story loves to use the term devilish to describe anything above average. Devilish talent,  devilish beast,  devilish tongue. Honestly,  the terms should have been monstrous and not devilish. Similarly,  I remember reading a chapter ( when he goes to Murong Xus family,  before the five talents come.)  The world servile has been used. MC looked at him in servility or something. Once again,  wrong verb. MC didn't give a **** about him. Their are several such instances where wrong terminology has been used. From around chapter 400-500,  divine weapons and divine dao has been replaced with Supreme Dao and weapons,  which is causing confusion. Then their is the cultivation level,  many times the levels have been changed or mixed. Where Profound should be used,  they have used Perfect and so on.  Plus cultivation level is not described clearly,  especially the Mysterious Exquisite level. Anyway,  talking about characters.  I am taking western novels such as those by Sanderson, Martin, archer and Rothfuss. Although an unfavorable yardstick,  it's a wasted effort if I compare CN  with CN novels. It's okay. His aspirations are rather vague and sudden. They lack motivation and are extremely forced. His love life is sudden. How can three meetings turn into a life long love commitment,  is something I can't fathom. The world building... Difficult to comment. Until ch 650 we have just gone over the Human and Xuan Yuan Mound. Several forbidden areas are still left. Despite that,  from what I can see,  the world building is rather lack luster. The politics is vague and completely depended in that regions owner and his backing.  The economy is not even mentioned. The power division is also rather confusing. I don't expect something of Martin's level,  but at least something?

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It's like I am really a superstar(IARAS) but with dice where the dice decides the luck of the protagonist.The world seems to be alternate world like in IARAS and I expect lots of faceslaping...and that's all I want right now that there's no more IARAS...

story is really good cant wait for more chapters thank you GODLY BEING GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!GOOD!

Well to be honest i saw a lot of potential on ur history but i don't like the type of mc that i've saw. Hi tries to be some kinda of Captain America like but this is not the type that i like. So to summarize the author either is sadic or want to run totally from any sign of a edgy mc. To be rlly honest everything i liked except the mc just not my cup of tea.