Dragon's Roar: This Game's NPC Wants to Avoid Apocalypse

I was captivated from the first chapter! Had to leave a review. Well-done!

I ONLY read 7 chapters but here are my thoughts :the writing is not bad. i would say good english.the story is moving forward fast paced without any kind of background info for the character(s), place, world, and there are contradictions or just stupid set up to try to make a situation were there would ve none. would have been a 1.6 but since i don't know the update speed i took 3 stars there. not really worth the read unfortunatly. fun conzept that could have been a great chill story

Lemme just say this a great and finish this review quickly for people that just came here to look at the reviews a little.Pros:-mc isn’t a wimp-mc isn’t a simp- mc doesn’t seek a giant harem but has some of the most beautiful women in the world that are in love with him (some are obsessed)-unlike other harems the harem members don’t suddenly disappear only to never be heard of again. They are almost always with him and he cares for his women ALOOOOOOT.- he does not go around acting chummy and trusts everyone he meets. Has a heart that does not let others in easily as he went through some stuff in his childhood. Currently has a low number of people he “trusts” that can only be counted on ones fingers.-harem members actually have a personality and aren’t bland like so many other novels I read.-novel isnt very cliche other than the fact that a lot of people near him turn out to be op. But the reason they are actually makes sense unlike the others novels where mc picks up random girl that’s struggling in some weird way and WOAH WHO WOULDA THOUGHT SHE ACTUALLY HAS A SUPER INFINITY DIVINE HEAVENLY SOVEREIGN YIN YANG SPIRIT ROOT AND CONSTITUTION OF THE ANCIENT EVIL FIENDGODS AND ALSO SHES HEAVENLY EMPERORS DAUGHTER??!!!?!?. it makes sense cause though he hasn’t revealed it yet it’s obvious that most of the girls with him are due to some events mentioned in some of the earlier chapters. Mostly having to do with destiny(you’ll understand if you read it)- this could also be a con for some but you can simply skip if if you don’t like it as it wouldn’t matter much to the story.  The story isn’t filled with lusty mc that bangs everyone and so far there haven’t been much smutty or $ex scenes ( whatever you wanna call it)  but some people might like that so maybe you think this shouldn’t be on the PROS list but whatever.-mc does not back away from a challenge as he considers himself to be “extremely prideful” which leads him to be arrogant but it’s not the annoying kind. When he’s arrogant it’s funny to watch cause he embarrasses tf outta other people lol. Mc has only ran away from a battle twice but that’s only cause he wasn’t expecting it in the first place. The first one, though he was very weak at the time, he managed to counterattack the one that attacked him and swore he would someday kill him. The second one was already resolved by him.- mc isn’t stupid and not once has he put his loved in a a dangerous position cause of his actions. He also never lets someone get away from him. You know how mc in other novels fights a young master and young master gets defeated and shouts “ ILL BE BACK FOR REVENGE!!!!” While getting hauled away by his loyal bootlickers and mc just watches them leave like a total retard? Mc here did it a few times and that’s only because he was smart and noticed it would be disadvantage but finished what they  started a few chapters later.- mc does not start as crippled trash ugly man with no talent. He was born and raised an orphan(don’t worry you won’t have to learn about his Chili’s hood by reading a lot of chapters) but was adopted into a family of some pretty noble people and become a very refined man. Looks normal at start but soon becomes one of the most handsome in the world( for those who don’t like normal looking mc)-not sure there are a few more but this is already too long and I doubt anyone would see this or especially read to the end.Cons:-sometimes the naming system is weird but it gets fixed in the later chapters.-author sometimes confuses names but that’s is also fixed in the later chapters. Lol that’s all I can think off. Anyway I’m waiting for more cause I finished all this in a day

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Cool concept for a Mc distrust of organisations due to past life. Mc was a very skilled assassin loner orphan betrayed by organisation that raised and trained him, almost survived....The Mc heart starts to thaw when the hosts body he transmigration to is the elder brother of an pair of siblings, their family that has been slaughtered and he's the Mc is saved by his younger brother. The Mc accept his new life and family, triggering the system which he distrust as to him he feels its like the previous organisation issuing missions etc.... interesting concept, wanting to control his own life destiny not be dictated but missions from the organisation system. The writing style is clean and gets u attached to the characters. There is a few minor grammar issues once in a while could be predictive text. but easy to work out. Very enjoyable keep up the good work.

Weak piece.There is no logic and consistency in the actions of the characters.  The main character of the MC who receives bonuses simply by the decision of the author without making any efforts or at least justification.In fact, the characters have not been identified, therefore, in 40 chapters, I cannot myself compose a portrait of any of them.Reading from time to time you make a facepalm in the hope that the author will be able to improve the quality, but this does not happen.Drop at the moment of stupidity with the kidnapping of the girl and the subsequent actions of the characters.

I love this story, fun, interesting, logical, and so much more. Totally recommend reading this. Keep up the good work bro. By the way, you should make a Discord, or Patreon.

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