Dorothy and the Codex of Forbidden Secrets

By the way system, how can I evolve the Pokémon that need to evolve while trading?

After turning around to leave Seth was surprised to see Jansen follow him and leave his companions passed out on the floor. How strange I knocked out his companions and he just abandoned them, Seth thought to himself keeping his attention on Jansen.

"Section 101!" The voice of a teacher, who tried to shepherd the students to their buses, cut through the noise and Jimin turned her way. The buses were sorted by sections and Jimin's room was in Section 101 so he walked closer. "You'll be using bus 56," she informed. Jimin went to where the woman was pointing to and searched for the right vehicle .

Hearing the voice, I slowly open my eyes.

"it's time to go home. Please lead your friends to pray Mat." said Mrs.

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The story is realistic and reflects on the true events that happens in a life of a young girl! It has so many lessons for readers to learn and to grow from them. Great work 👍

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