doomsday reboot

Pacing is way too fast and character interactions seem forced, not enough details and background information. Fights need some work as well.                             

The book has a potential to be great. I love the twists and turns in the story . I can't wait for another chapter.  I recommend this book to those looking for fantasty books.

Please read this before you start the novel. 🦋   First of all, there’s no rape or miscarriage in this book, but please note that the content will be explicit and may be sensitive for some readers.    I value feedback and criticism, and I read and appreciate every comment and gift.    If you spot a plot hole, please let me know, as sometimes the story takes over and I might forget to fill the gaps. Thank you so much for reading, and if you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask—I promise I don’t bite! ✨

I like it really good I definitely recommend!!Author one question is the mc going so be evil I hope so?

This novel is a hidden gem! The story is engaging from the very beginning, with interesting characters and a plot that keeps you hooked. The writing is clear and easy to follow, making it a quick and enjoyable read. If you're looking for something fun and memorable, I highly recommend giving this one a try!

I’ve read 173 chapters so far, and the story isn’t a typical isekai tale like many others, which is a plus. When I started this story, I was expecting something different, keeping Rise of the Undead Legion in mind, but I ended up with… a different kind of novel. It’s still hard to say how the plot will unfold, so we’ll see what the author has "cooked up" for us.For a beginner undead MC, he gains skills, legendary items, and defeats strong opponents a bit too quickly, but I understand that without this, it might be boring. However, the rapid progression from zero to hero in just a few weeks feels a bit too fast, in my opinion.

"You are up? Good, you didn't forget that you are starting school today, Rin. Go clean your teeth and wash your face and hands, dress up in your school uniform and come eat breakfast," the woman whose name was Traey Mia said with a broad smile on her face while looking at her son.

Then i took a look at the current screen