Divine Necromancer : Cultivating Life & Death

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"I'll cover you, you lift up the rubble at the front of the building. I can feel a group of people trapped inside. We need to get them out and get them to the Helicarrior." He ordered, letting go of her as did.

"If this is the case, does it mean I'm so fast that it looks like this even if slowed?" Eric finally speaked

Hello everyone. I'm the author of this novel. I have been trying to improve my writing for this whole year. I hope this time I didn't make those silly mistakes. Hope you all will enjoy it even though it might be lacking as I'm not a professional yet. Thank you.

Story is really good, just feels like bad translation.Characters are interestingCan i get raw name pls?----------------------------------

      Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if you fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.   

Really good read so far! The thing that stands out most for me in this book is the dialogue. The character designs are nice and all, but the dialogue is really fleshing out our characters, like Soujin, who is surprisingly spirited and driven and a little snarky, or Muffet, who threw me for a loop with her whole 'interaction' with Captain Blackhart. You get a feel of the fact that these characters are more than meets the eye.The action is good so far and I appreciate the immediate dive into Sword Magic and Mystcry. I hope the fact that Soujin is starting as a Captain won't hamper how we perceive power progression in the story (if that is something the author intends to explore).All in all great read