Disciple Of The Black Zenith, Lives Again?

Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.

Reviewing gives me power.5 star shall be my superpower.Readers I shall overpower.This was my attempt at empower.Let me give you a flower.

Loving the fact that this story kicks off with a world transfer that doesn't actually involve the main character getting killed. He's an intellectual and that is my favorite type among all main character types. Gonna keep this in my library and hope that it updates regularly.Good job author!

I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is 😱(I won’t say more because then it’ll be a spoiler😁).There were a few present and past tense inconsistencies, but no grammatical errors or such that I found. All in all: both the work and author show high potential. Keep it going Author!❤️

Undying Cockroach (Level 1)

Much of the tension lifted from his body, and he looked up triumphantly at the clouds of rising smoke.

Viltus looks at them and laughs a little. After that, he says,

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