I really like this novel, but i've got the impression that the hero is far too immature. The reaction he has with a few kids is puerile, it make me a bit sad if we take account that he is 30's.
Needs a few grammar corrections... getting into lecture mode explaining the levels of power and whatnot of the universe is a bit forced could be more natural with hints here and there to make us get it. But nevertheless a good story so far will continue to read it
I'm currently writing this review after having binge read to Ch. 118 over the last 3 days. This is a very well developed novel. The author is very descriptive and it's been a joy to read. The romance seems very flushed out and the characters develop well with the story. I only gave it a four for character design because sometimes the characters seem to react to certain things out of character. The lemons are also quite fantastic if that's what you're thinking about picking this one up for. That being said, it is definitely more of a slow burn novel that focuses more on the characters and romantic developments than some that are more in your face about it. The writing quality truly is fantastic and has been a joy to read, small mistakes here and there with diction but we all make those sometimes. Keep up the great work author, I'm excited to see how the story develops.. Cassandra for the win btw.
Mabel's vision regains focus and sees worried faces huddled around her. She slowly gets up and sits on the edge of the soft white bed that Jeric has created for her. "What happened? W-where are we?"
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