Die Versuchung des Alphas

Near the end of chapter 229 some lines aren’t translated

I swear this novel update schedule is as tragic as walm's life

Am on chapter 21 and they keep building up her revenge but other comments seem to hint there will be none and that is enraging.

Beautifully written, love it!!!!!!!🤎🤎

You might come across somewhere stating that Macaroni is shōnen-ai, but personally, I find it hard to see it that way. If you don't delve into additional details, the relationships between characters can be perceived as friendship or something similar.  

The plot is fairly straightforward (since the manga isn't very long). The characters are amiable and realistic. I found the humor to be quite amusing. The art style was a bit irritating at first, but I quickly got used to it.  

Overall, it's not exceptionally amazing or original, but it's pretty good, and I genuinely enjoyed it!!! ^^<p>

I absolutely LOVED this story! It's incredibly funny and has just the right amount of mystery to keep you guessing! It truly is worth your time, and I think Sydney was my favorite character.  

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Macaroni tells the story of an orphan embarking on a perilous journey while being pursued by unknown individuals. The protagonist, Robin, is unaware of why he's being targeted and initially seems oblivious to the danger surrounding him. When the priest who raised him can no longer accompany him, Robin hires a bounty hunter as his bodyguard. A gunslinger seeking adventure also joins their group, and together they navigate the challenges of evading their pursuers. It's an entertaining narrative, albeit one where the mystery might become frustrating at times. Initially, I was skeptical about the storyline—I couldn’t grasp why Robin was being hunted and doubted whether it could be satisfactorily resolved within a two-volume manga. However, without divulging any spoilers, I can confirm that the final two chapters concluded the plot in a manner that fully satisfied me. The revelation aligns perfectly with the western genre, and the pacing suits the series' length, tying everything together seamlessly.

Regrettably, the artwork leaves much to be desired, typical of early-2000s yaoi styles, featuring blocky faces and unappealing lips. While it serves its purpose, it isn't a strong selling point. On the positive side, the female characters are attractive, and their attire surpasses what's often seen in other manga westerns. There's a notable presence of female characters, which is uncommon for both westerns and BL genres, and they're all quite likable. I particularly enjoyed Ted’s sisters. Regarding the main characters, Robin appears somewhat out of place in this world—his personality and thought processes feel distinctly Japanese, understandable given the writer's background. In contrast, the other leads, Sydney and Ted, along with the supporting cast, integrate more convincingly into the western setting, except for Ted's katana, which feels incongruous; a U.S. cavalry sword would have been more fitting, though still unusual. The villains are credible, and the ensemble cast interacts well.

Now, let's address what I suspect most readers are eager to hear about: the gay elements. Despite MAL labeling this series as erotica, there's no sexual content, and the romance is so understated that it can almost be overlooked. In fact, I'd argue this leans more towards "homoerotic fanservice" than an actual "gay romance." I'm uncertain if it qualifies as queerbaiting—I remain undecided on that—but it certainly didn't meet my expectations as a queer individual fond of westerns. Not every story needs to emulate Gemma Files’ Hexslinger trilogy, but investing some effort into crafting a plausible relationship would have been beneficial.

In summary, Macaroni was a fairly enjoyable read. The characters were appealing, and the story engaging. Its primary shortcomings were the subpar male character designs and the romantic undertones that left a sour taste. I believe the story would have fared better had the author crafted it as a straightforward western devoid of romance altogether, rather than attempting to force in BL elements. Ted was correct in dismissing any romantic advances during his watch—a fantastic example of aro representation, indeed. So, there is something here for the queer community after all. Although Macaroni wasn't exactly what I hoped for, it wasn't an unpleasant way to spend an hour or so.<p>