first 10 ch looks good after then it getting boring , main character remain same type there is not so development side character dont have much characterstics , throughtout reading chp you will not feel any attachment or excitment whatever event happening
MC is f$$k too OPHe levels up like 30 times a day while other players in the game level up like 5 - 10 times per day.MC luck is crazy beyond belief There's literally no point in reading this novel since there's barely any challenge or obstacle for the character it basically reading his life story (Which is boring as f#k) The game this novel is about is made by his mom's company and sponsored by his dad's company -_-
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I like the story so far, done reading the first 10 chapters. I'll continue again later. Is it a trend today that historical story's ML was always in love with someone else? 🤔
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