Diablos: The Original Warlock

I feel so weird writing this review because I wanted to like this story. And part of me does like it. But I also f##king hate it lol. Okay let's start off with this. The Arthur isn't really a bad writer. He set up the world really well and it was easy to follow. Killer monsters, people with powers fights them, good guys are Enforcers. Easy. The first half of Volume One is Good. Really good. At least a3.5 or 4 out of 5. And then you get to the rest... So first off. A compliant. It's f##king long. The first half of volume one is good but so stupidly long. The first chapter is nearly 5000 words. F##k. And it gets longer... Also you can tell it's his first story and the writing is meh. That gets better. But the story gets worse. Volume Two is f##ked. Kind of. The final part of volume one, and the first half of volume two feel mega rushed. I feel like he just made s##t up that he thought would be cool. Thankfully the second half of Volume Two was good. Again. Better than volume one. But I don't want to go through s##t to get a semi valuable diamond. Now Volume 3... What? What even is it? I feel like s##t just happens to happen. The lovable characters are gone there's like 15 plots and its just bad. And spoiler so don't read this part if you care about that it ends on a rebbot? It just ends. Hero dies. Story restarts... Why! That's so stupid and so dumb. I hate it. Legit hate it. Not good at all. So Volume 3 has ended and the Arthur has rebooted the entire story. Volume 4 is volume one again but with some changes. And.. It's good. I mean it's a f##king stupid plot point and a mess to get to it, the Volume so far is the best. It as the easy and fun story of Volume One, with the improved writing. It really feels like its own story and not a part of Enforcers? But still Enforcers? Its weird. I'm gonna keep reading because I know the story is good. It just bad also? It's so weird? The comments are a meme and is just off I guess? So heres what I say. Read Volume one, skip 2, and 3, and go straight to 4. By the end of Volume one you'll know if you enjoy these characters or not.

Really good read at first but after Tang Ge left, it became gradually worse. What I dislike the most is how MC is treated in his school, where he's basically their slave. He got to tank all of the attack (even though someone got a turtle contracted beast mind you). He's got to do all the cooking (Although he accepts that, the other actually thinks it's a RIGHT. Even the teacher that ask the other student to go in seclusion EXCEPT for MC because he's got to do the food)

This novel is so good and also so ridiculous 🤣🤣 I almost died laughing to some of its chapters 🤣😭 If you want some laughter and wheezing you should definitely give this a try 🤣Ps: Hopefully they will continue translating, my will is not strong enough to read MTL 😭

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Kinda worried about their story. I mean he killed her brother and father and she also killed his people. But then again how could she fell in love with her family murderers. Worried but excited because from Auxilary chapter also saw how she won't be bending for his love. She is fighting back and that too very well!

The story has much potential and I can see it going places. However, I know this story can be of better quality. The story telling could be better and more description would fit this story nicely. I hope you keep up the good work author!

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