Author after reading this story for some time now. I've seen you improve your writtinf skills. I am still enjoying your story and hope you release more soon.
Would have been better if MC wasn't so evil This kind of 'evil hypnotism' is one of the most common tropes seen japanese hentai. I like the concept but I hate this kind of story development. What I mean is, why should MC make the girls as his slaves? Why not into lovers? What's point in having s*x all day? That's just pure wish fulfillment. This could have more realistic and could have been made into a unique and popular novel if the MC wasn't a sadist pervert. Just think about having hypnotizing powers and use it destroy your enemies and not ur loved ones.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I suppose The Girl sees this reincarnation as a way of living out those outlandish fantasies of heroism. But that could have some devastating consequences, even though she has some OP powers. But I can't even complain, since I have on multiple occasions done similar things in this world.
Popular Reviews