Den of Thieves (BL)

The spelling errors are quite bothering to fully get into the story (in the early chapters) as a reader for me. But the plot is kinda interesting. And morover it's also rooted with realism and has a very grounded approach. When characters are having a conversation, it really feels like two people are actually talking.My only gripe is the slow pace and very long stretched out chapters. I am a difficult reader, so it may be just for me🤷u200d♂️ but since the novel had already crossed a considerable amount of chapters, I believe has rectified all the issues I mentioned.Good luck with your Edward's self-journey

This novel was your usual top soldier guy, but this novel is much better than those others. Well, I can only say that the translation is pretty good which looks interesting, but unfortunately, the mc was still similar to those other novels of which won't kill someone unless being schemed several times. The mc warned his enemy several times to never scheme to him, and later on, he got schemed and his cousin nearly died. If it wasn't because he knows how to fight then they would've already died. This type of trashy actions, despite great translation, it is all for naught. Therefore if you can accept the mc being schemed several times that anyone important to him had to experience close death first before he will take action, then this is for you. I really don't know how he can call himself  God of Death or Killing Machine. Is it his integrity? Morals? What piece of trash, this novel wasn't even close to reality, yet he had to save all close to him in cliche situations. Fucking common, absolutely trash.As a top soldier, the danger must be immediately removed. Yet, the mc warned the enemy several times only. For what? Waiting for the mc to get angry? Trash.I'd rate 3.4 stars for the great translation and the cheeky lines the rest are garbage.

The story line of this book is all over the place. It isn’ constant at all.

Sorry for a low star for updates. The story is good. I am strange because I like gender bender stories but straight. It's really interesting keep up the work! Thanks for the story! 😘💓💕

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Darwin and Joshua's adventures are well written and entertaining. This is written like Douglas Adam's and Dashiell Hammett had a love child and it is J.G.M. Daw.  Well worth the read!  I am looking forward to more adventures from the Finderverse.

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A very good story i most say, it start fresh with description of event very easy to understand. The battle scene left more to be desired but Julius truly had a good head over his shoulder due to his strategic mind.I haven't read that far but if what was started with was continued we will have one of the best Kingdom building novels.Give it a try, you won't regret it.