I really like this novel and it's one of the most underrated ones out there. Comparing this to some other more known novels that are written quite badly this one is amazing
A good idea behind the story but after the first target I thought mc was going to be much more cruel than he was, but he became more of a pushover but then again its character development
I have read over 100 chapters, which maybe a-lot or maybe its not that much, but I can only say, "What a waste of time!". The writing is quite poor, the plot is not very rational many-a-times, and it feels very contrived, especially the tension and conflict. Very disappointed, of what I've read from Er Gen, this and ISSTH have similar problems, while his only novel I enjoyed is AWE and thats because of the early part of the story basically up until the end of the Night-crypt arc and Bai Xioachun as a main character.All of his novels have problems but AWE is much more lighthearted so I don't care as much, however this novel is not like that which only adds to make me feel even more annoyed. Basically reading this is an exercise in self-mutilation.
I'm a huge fan of stories about cultivation and leveling up. I think this book has the potential of becoming my next favorite cultivation story if you take out some of the repititive words used. I'd love the action to happen soon tho 😊...
The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story.I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters.As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe. Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent.I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library.All the best,Author!
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