Deku harem

update is too slow

The spelling errors are quite bothering to fully get into the story (in the early chapters) as a reader for me. But the plot is kinda interesting. And morover it's also rooted with realism and has a very grounded approach. When characters are having a conversation, it really feels like two people are actually talking.My only gripe is the slow pace and very long stretched out chapters. I am a difficult reader, so it may be just for me🤷u200d♂️ but since the novel had already crossed a considerable amount of chapters, I believe has rectified all the issues I mentioned.Good luck with your Edward's self-journey

A well constructed story. First few chapters manage to pull me in and I'm thoroughly bought by the plot. Characters seems well thought out. Waiting for more ! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Overall it looks to be a WoW clone with a some different take on things such as no Horde vs Alliance but same classes and a majority of the vanilla races. It doesn't really detract from the story the game elements are solid, it is overall a decent read.I am not really engaged with the moments when he is out of game it mainly just revolves around his cat and minor life things.The character has been really fleshed out despite 30 chapters, I would like to see some character depth as at the moment he doesn't have any real defining traits.Honestly not sure what the author is building this story it reads a bit like a slice of life as the power ramping of some VR novels isn't really here that much. I guess that is probably the direction the story is going since the premise of his character is halos/buffs so he is relatively passive.

Hiruzen turns his gaze to me. I sigh before explaining the basic history of my family to everyone present.

Lin Dong's body was completely healed and his Qi and Planetary Essence were back. His father noticed the sudden movements and his eyes opened and he smiled when he saw Lin Dong didn't get hurt.

I looked to see if there were any stairs since I had claustrophobia since I didn't have the best childhood memories. In fact I don't remember anything that was fun or great when I was a child, but that's not important in his story how we met. So I was looking and found none, but there was lots of elevators here so I forced myself to go in.

As always, the way to a woman's heart is through her stomach. I giggle and ruffle her hair. Oh, how luscious her brownish red locks are!!! Oh God, how thick and smooth they are!!