Deep Sea Party

Finally a great story ,
•Authors writing style is good
•grammar is good , ~YAY
•some cliches but not too much
•no brain damage M.C ~HOORAY
•the standard VR plot
•no time travelling/plot armour shit
•LASTLY : SOLO MC ~~~

Hey!

Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com  (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.

The editor needs to be a better job

How is it Cleo's fault that her parents died?  it was an accident Aunty Lydia.  You should be humane enough to sympathize with Cleo.  gosh....

I love it! When is the next update coming in?

I loved the story.

I'm interested in the whole dynamic you have set up here.  Not the typical mafia stories.  I look forward to seeing more updates.  22 chapters 3/22/23

All of these books are fire and addictive!! If you’re looking for HOT & Edge worthy Mafia stories/series… look no more!! Jane Doe Writing (the awesome author) is amazing with all of her stories.  I’ve read all of her books so far and I truly hope she writes more!! Very talented author