The world building is good as you can see it has mysteries which leave us to wonder. I like the mc personally I feel like I would relate to mc he feels very human not too arrogant and a bit of humor. The characters are described well. Great work and keep it up.
The story is predominantly told from the MC's point of view. While the narrative can be a bit lazy at times and the world-building progresses slowly for the number of chapters, the plot remains interesting and fresh. The relationship development is particularly intriguing and well-executed.
The story is slow-paced and there are some mistakes here and there but overall, The plot is quite fascinating. The MC is not your average childish or righteous but is quite smart and adaptable to his situation. The side characters are also well-written. The mysteries surrounding the world make it more interesting. The battle scenes are average but could be improved.
In my opinion, If the Author doesn't mess up too much, It has the potential to become a gem. Good Luck
Great start, a bit generic but we come to this genre for this so it's okay, I like the baby start better but can't have everything. I think I'll have a good time with this one
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In my opinion, If the Author doesn't mess up too much, It has the potential to become a gem. Good Luck