The sino**is is useless... I don't know what the story look like, but i hope it's gonna be well. And, why i think i never see this novel on the votes place?
Interesting premise and the power the mc gets it pretty interestingand has potential. However, Thats as far as compliments go with this novel. The world is not interesting and charcters and scenarios are cliched. The MC and his friends are the weakest aspect of this novel. They are supposedly seniors in high school yet they are described and all act as if they are middle schoolers, which are one of the most annoyig group of people. The MC is specially annoying, acting like an asshat sometimes, while a nuisance at others. The situations so far are dragged out and are a bore to read. Ten whole chapters were wasted on this forced date/hangout with the future female lead that added nothing to the story besides making the MC look like an unlikeable douch. I would understand his behavior if he was in middle school or early teens but not someone thats soon to be applying To university. At that age I would expect some level of awareness of ones own actions. Overall, very cliched story with interesting premise but unlikable characters, boring world and predictable plot. This is the standard for Webnovels so i shouldnt be surprised. Nothing will be lost by skipping this story or even reading and dropping it half way through. It isnt memorable or remarkable in any single facet.
The story seems to have a good concept, but the mc is generally pretty dumb and doesn't seem to know what common sense is. Also the grammer even on the "edited" chapters is pretty bad.
Usually I don't review based on grammar. But this novel is literally a SCAM. Free chapters are translated quite well, but beyond paywall translation drops to MTL quality. Names change, descriptions of stuff change, Her/him is mixed up and overall just bad grammar.Story could decent if it went on as it was for first 40 chapters. I would give first 40 chapters maybe 3.5, not bad, not really super good, but enjoyable. But since translation turns into trash suddenly changing names and stuff, it's just unbearable to go on. And really worst of all you are supposed to pay for it.I just sincerely hope nobody pays for this if they wish to continue despite the bad translation, just look for other options.
It's rare not having a bunch of new characters at once. Just one to begin with was much welcomed.I was surprised with the rich vocabulary from the very beginning of the story, it might be a little overwhelming for someone who barely played a rpg once, but if you get past this, you'll be surprised with the comedy.I like to read and the situation with the characters are merging well.Btw Guidance is a fair name. It's far from the bunch of "God" or "GM" etc. It isn't much but that's great to me.Finally, you'll find yourself in front of a first-person narrated story. That refreshing! It's much easier to relate to the troubles Moriya casualy talks about. Modern problems(/interests) require modern solutions.Also I don't know if the cover of the novel has especially been done for it, but oh boy does it fit well.Great work so far.
While a lot of it has been done before, its done well. Would recommend giving this a try. Its an OP protagonist and all that entails. So 10 out of 10 for this
Ironically that I am giving my own book a review but I have something important for all to know...I am currently 12 years old. It's 2018. I am in school so I usually only release 2 chapters in each holiday but sometimes I write in math class... As a 12 year old I this is my first time writing a proper book. Each chapter I write should have slightly more words than the last. I accept all comments but no spam. Thank you for reading my book.
this is a slow paced novel, so if you have limited atention span it's better to get away.For the story itself it's a combination of i really am a superstar and losing money to be a tycoon(you can find both here). by itself it's not considered original or unique since plenty other have similar premise. but the author have succeed in making this book an interesting read, i hope this book get selected.
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