Story and character development is going in good direction and hopes if goes on like that. Harem member are also good and hope they get enough screen time unlike other novel where they get separated for 200 to 300 chapters.
I just read this story an hour ago and I can tell this is top-tier writing. I found little to no grammar errors. The characters are fresh and unique, the world building is different from the usual cultivation novels (starts in a desert, layers of lore and mingling of food, culture). The story arcs are satisfying, imo the author should get more power stones. He seems to post daily so that's also a plus point.I really liked the part where Hu Shuo gets drunk, this story is a gem!
A spectacular novel that forces the MC to use his brain to survive through incredible plans, in addition to very good narration and story progression, in addition to very good Mc and secondary characters. Simply incredible, five stars.
It’s a shame the Author stopped writing; the novel is very exciting and is a good read for people who like OP MC’s. If the author ever continues, a lot of people would be happy.
I will 100% update this to a 5.0 rating once the author continues the story. I absolutely loved the previous book and was really excited about this one but it stopped. the characters and story previously were fantastic and this new book did not disappoint so far. please, author, I have been waiting for quite a while and very much anticipate your return!!!
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The plot is amazing, it fans out smoothly over the chapters. I was instantly hooked after reading first few chapters. The character development and writing proficiency is good, except for a few grammatical errors here and there. Will readily recommend it to readers if they are interested in sci fi and adventurous plots like this one.Keep up the good work 👍
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